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Breathing

Posted on November 30, 2013March 31, 2014 by D. D. Syrdal

Too many…ellipses…in your manuscript…make characters sound…breathy and…asthmatic…

— Rhonda Helms (@RHelmsBooks) October 16, 2013

Author: D. D. Syrdal

Writer of vampire stories and science fiction. First novel, "Revenants Abroad", available now at Amazon. If you like a vampire you can go out drinking with and still respect yourself in the morning, I think you'd like Andrej. View All Posts

6 thoughts on “Breathing”

Eric Syrdal says:

November 30, 2013 at 8:25 am

Nonsense…..i…..love…..ellipses….. 😉

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1. D. D. Syrdal says:
  
  November 30, 2013 at 8:26 am
  
  …he said as he finished jogging up the hill. 😎
  
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  1. Eric Syrdal says:
    
    November 30, 2013 at 8:31 am
    
    😀
    
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rosie49 says:

November 30, 2013 at 4:58 pm

LOL…. you leave me breathless!

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rosie49 says:

November 30, 2013 at 4:59 pm

BTW… beautiful background, too.

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1. D. D. Syrdal says:
  
  November 30, 2013 at 5:15 pm
  
  Thanks, Rosie 🙂 And I see the snow has started to fall as well!
  
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