Breathing Written by D. D. Syrdal Too many…ellipses…in your manuscript…make characters sound…breathy and…asthmatic… — Rhonda Helms (@RHelmsBooks) October 16, 2013 Share this:RedditPinterestTwitterFacebookPrintEmailTumblrGooglePocketLinkedInLike this:Like Loading... Related 6 thoughts on “Breathing” Nonsense…..i…..love…..ellipses….. ;) Reply …he said as he finished jogging up the hill. 8-) Reply :-D LOL…. you leave me breathless! Reply BTW… beautiful background, too. Reply Thanks, Rosie :) And I see the snow has started to fall as well! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.